Comments for Graham Lawrence https://www.grahamlawrence.net Writer, Publisher, Retired Wed, 30 Oct 2024 03:29:02 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.6.2 Comment on Cock by Graham Lawrence https://www.grahamlawrence.net/cock-a-story-by-graham-lawrence/#comment-81 Wed, 19 Jun 2024 03:48:28 +0000 https://www.grahamlawrence.net/?p=6160#comment-81 In reply to Angela Elwood.

Glad you like it and thanks for the advice. This was written recently in about two sittings! I was today toying with the idea of the DS Dereck series! But not sure if that is the right angle yet. I have a mass of fire investigation stories to tell, but the best will need very heavy changes from reality!!! And you are right. I do have the time.

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Comment on Cock by Angela Elwood https://www.grahamlawrence.net/cock-a-story-by-graham-lawrence/#comment-79 Tue, 18 Jun 2024 10:04:52 +0000 https://www.grahamlawrence.net/?p=6160#comment-79 Enjoyed the development of this story. I agree there is plenty of scope for a full book, opportunity to tell the story of each character and weave it together. You have time now!

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Comment on The Wedding Party by Graham Lawrence https://www.grahamlawrence.net/the-wedding-part-a-writing-by-graham-lawrence/#comment-77 Tue, 11 Jun 2024 04:44:59 +0000 https://www.grahamlawrence.net/?p=6102#comment-77 In reply to Angela Elwood.

Thank you

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Comment on The Wedding Party by Angela Elwood https://www.grahamlawrence.net/the-wedding-part-a-writing-by-graham-lawrence/#comment-75 Mon, 10 Jun 2024 08:03:10 +0000 https://www.grahamlawrence.net/?p=6102#comment-75 Interesting read

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Comment on The Wedding Party by Graham Lawrence https://www.grahamlawrence.net/the-wedding-part-a-writing-by-graham-lawrence/#comment-62 Wed, 22 May 2024 03:57:59 +0000 https://www.grahamlawrence.net/?p=6102#comment-62 In reply to Wayne Duplessis.

Thanks for the encouragement and nice words, Wayne. It is really appreciated It is really good to hear that the pace came over.

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Comment on The Wedding Party by Wayne Duplessis https://www.grahamlawrence.net/the-wedding-part-a-writing-by-graham-lawrence/#comment-61 Tue, 21 May 2024 13:29:21 +0000 https://www.grahamlawrence.net/?p=6102#comment-61 Brilliant. The giddy pace, and the unexpected perspective combined for a rousing journey, however short.

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Comment on Cowboy by Graham Lawrence https://www.grahamlawrence.net/cowboy-a-story-by-graham-lawrence/#comment-50 Sat, 27 Apr 2024 07:02:08 +0000 https://www.grahamlawrence.net/?p=6059#comment-50 In reply to Valerie Wong.

Hi Valerie. I am so glad to hear you enjoyed it. I did not know you had family in Bangkok! You learn something every day. We are all doing well even through the April 2024 heatwave…
And the best to you and yours, too

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Comment on Cowboy by Valerie Wong https://www.grahamlawrence.net/cowboy-a-story-by-graham-lawrence/#comment-47 Thu, 25 Apr 2024 15:13:22 +0000 https://www.grahamlawrence.net/?p=6059#comment-47 I really enjoyed this story, Graham. Took me right back to Bangkok, which I visit regularly as I have family there. Hope you and yours are doing well!

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Comment on Cowboy by Graham Lawrence https://www.grahamlawrence.net/cowboy-a-story-by-graham-lawrence/#comment-44 Wed, 17 Apr 2024 10:39:48 +0000 https://www.grahamlawrence.net/?p=6059#comment-44 In reply to Angela Elwood.

Thanks once again for the feedback Ange. I am glad you enjoyed it and the ending! It will be great if I get to see you again out here. It will always be a special place filled with memories, I feel for those of us who shared a few years or longer here.

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Comment on Cowboy by Angela Elwood https://www.grahamlawrence.net/cowboy-a-story-by-graham-lawrence/#comment-42 Wed, 17 Apr 2024 09:47:07 +0000 https://www.grahamlawrence.net/?p=6059#comment-42 I totally agree with Raymond. I’m glad to have experienced Bangkok and while reading your piece I was able to remember the very essence of that brilliant city and the Thai culture, also imaging Andy duplicated many times! I loved the closing, watching him fading into distance, merging with many others and his smoke evaporating, disappearing…

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